Friday, 18 May 2012

The blacksmith’s wife [part 13]


Slipping from his grasp I swam away then surfaced, shaking water from eyes which pleaded a repeat performance;   speedily, satisfyingly supplied.   As reward I promised to renounce all stripling lads, but no sooner spoke than from the trees emerged, moonlit, a veritable full-grown lusty man who’d been spying on us from the bank.  
More than just my conscience pricked, but he surprised me, shouting  ‘Gabriel, if that’s your wife, I vow you did not over-paint this lily – remember, Brother, share and share alike!’
Gabriel’s fury roared:   ‘By Christ, I swear you’ll try cockles if you lay a hand on her!’

Friday's Prediction is now hosted by Phil Ambler over at Phlambler's world    Phil's first three words were shake (all variations), lily and cockle and I was delighted to discover, from Brewer's Phrase and Fable, that 'to try cockles' meant to be hanged.

Hooray for Lulu!!!

I've finally managed to upload and order proof copies of 'Not wanted on voyage' and found, as suggested, Lulu certainly is cheaper.
Once I've checked this out I may well relocate most of my books there.

Wednesday, 16 May 2012

The Other in-laws



With each frayed and fretted hour Liz found her husband’s words less and less convincing: “They’re only human, love, you’re every bit as good as them, and don’t you forget it.”   It was alright for him, he got on well with everybody, and expected them to get on with him (which was probably the secret) but Liz expected always to be in the wrong when meeting new people (though once she got to know them it was fine, she could relax and be herself, she listened more than she talked, but once they knew her it wasn’t a problem.)

And Dora was a lovely girl, lovely, and Harold so lucky to have found her ... not that she wasn’t lucky too, but he’d had plenty of competition to start with, and with working away ... he’d certainly proved himself cycling that dreadful hilly journey twice a week, just for a few hours ... and the letters he’d written, and postcards they’d sent ...

It was just that Dora’s father was so ... educated? ... well, no, not really, he’d gone to work for his Dad at thirteen same as Luther, but he’d had articles in the paper and certainly read a lot, according to Dora ... and as for her mother ... well, that was the main problem, Sarah Sutcliffe had a reputation as a bit of a dragon, not a woman to cross (but she’d also heard it was a case of having to be because Tom was inclined to be a bit of a dreamer, a bit daft with money at times).

By now she’d just about got the hang of who was who with all Dora’s aunts and uncles (dozens of them) ... but that knowledge might desert her when she met them all at once ... it was a toss up as to whether it was better to meet them all at once or two at a time ... at least outside, going for a good long walk, it’d be easier to deal with them than sat in a stuffy front room, face to face over tea things, everyone looking at her, and unable to get away.

As Luther stirred beside her she smiled to herself, thinking of his attempts at reassurance ... so long as he was beside her she could face anyone in the world.


Comment:  The attached photo has always seemed to tell a story, Luther Pickles is extreme right with Liz seated beside him, holding a cup of tea.   I think it is Dora in the light coloured outfit, putting something into her mouth but cannot be 100% sure.   Sarah, Tom and Liz and Luther’s son Harold are not in this photo, which I estimate was taken Spring 1910, a month or so before Harold and Dora got engaged.
[submitted to 6S February 2010]

Bloody incompetent Blurb!!!

They tell me after I have wasted weeks going backwards and forwards that Bookify 'does not do black and white text' and since I cannot see the final half a dozen pages onscreen then I should just delete them!
No matter that the denoument is on the final, missing page!!!

Tuesday, 15 May 2012

National Flash Fiction day

I've just learnt via The Domesticated Bohemian that today is National Flash Fiction day  so although I haven't signed up for it I thought I'd do my bit by posting my Thinking Ten piece for today, the prompt for which was the opening sentence of this:   

As yet unexploded

The letter lay unopened on the table.   And it smelt.   It smelt of her, the distinctive, pervasive and ridiculously expensive smell of her.
Of course I hadn’t opened it.   Had had to fetch the meat tongs to pick it up from the doormat and lay it on top of the double-paged pizza flyer that had accompanied it, to avoid contaminating the table, so averse to touching it had I been.   And then I'd needed to sterilise the tongs, dunking them in the dregs of the boiling water left over from my breakfast coffee, only just resisting adding bleach and disinfectant because I didn’t know which would be most apt and anyway thought I’d been told, once upon a time, that the two together gave off poisonous fumes or something.   Just like the bitch to try to kill me off, no matter how third-hand, how tenuous the possibility!
Stupid of me, and over-reacting since the postman would have handled it last, and before him goodness knows how many others since it left her grasping fingers, nails no doubt as expensively polished as the rest of her.
And there was no need to open it.   I knew what it said because, in typical belt and braces fashion (and a small twitch of a smile here as I momentarily imagined her in plain black elastic braces before, unavoidably, the elastic turned to silk and became diamond-encrusted) the bloody woman had also phoned.   Left a message, giving date and time and, as per usual, a reminder about her dietary requirements.
No, no need to open it, but this time I’d be the one to take action, the one to leave.  He could take time off work and look after his bloody mother all on his own.

Friday, 11 May 2012

Isn't the brain a wonderful thing!

No I'm not boasting but intrigued and impressed, having picked up today's words from Lily Child's Feardom's final hosting of the Friday Prediction, which are impersonate, elegant and shovel

Last week's eleventh episode of 'The blacksmith's wife' ended "We entered the river, clinging." and my first thought was 'oh damn I'll have to get him back to his forge if I'm going to be able to use shovel and how the hell do I fit the other two in?'

But I typed the words, put brain in gear, got one sentence written, two words used - and I still have another seventy-five words to play with!
Practice has a LOT to do with it - and I shall continue to practice over at Phil Ambler's site from next week.

[The picture is a part-finished illustration for for episode three which can be read on the Friday Predctions page at the top of this blog]

Tuesday, 8 May 2012

Observations on plotting

Things I have re-remembered from previous novels:
  1. A timeline is essential, to avoid contradictions and 4 month pregnancies and to make sure ages remain compatible with the passing of the years
  2.  A mind map, for working out the whys and consequences and reasons for is, I well remember, a very good and productive thing to do BUT I have to make the effort to either clear a space on my worktop, since it lacks room to do comfortably or take paper and pencil downstairs - why oh why is this so difficult to actually do??
  3. Letting characters lead the way CAN be done.   A couple of days ago one said, of another "she had no idea how Stuart had met his end, yet was aware she ought to"   I too had no idea, but by allowing what I DID know of the characters concerned I have come up with an explanation.

Sunday, 6 May 2012

Progress report - week 18

Readying my report for Write 1 Sub 1 - and aware that in not actively seeking nor being paid for anything I write I consider myself something of a dilettante - it seemed not a bad idea to note where I am so far with current projects:
'Damage limitation' (113k words/396 pages)  - the fourth in the story of Bridie Burdock and Sean Donovan, is ready to re-publish, having been copiously read, re-read and corrected since last July.
'Not wanted on voyage' (128K words/378 pages) - I am trying to publish as to-be-proofed.
'Making Good' - a follow up to 'Damage limitation', currently 38K but I need the characters to begin talking to me again.
'The longest shadows' - currently the preferred title for what is at the moment filed under 'Susannah Elphinstone', a story spurred into being at the beginning of February by one of Lisa Ricard Claro's Book Blurb Friday photographs, further inspired by the discovery of a photograph of a house from my own past and happily progressing - wordcount currently 31K.
It's also pleasing to note that I am trying harder with this latest one to both think a bit more about the plot in advance and include a little more description.
Finally, as I stated in my previous post,  'The blacksmith's wife'  looks set to continue beyond May 11th and currently stands at 1300 words.

Saturday, 5 May 2012

Friday prediction - update


This the illustration for part 2 of The blacksmith's wife, once again a digital combination of print and plate and drawing (ten layers of them!)

Part 11 - 100 words incorporating psycho, belt and purgatory -  which can be read on the above Friday Predictions page - was added yesterday to what is Lily's penultimate week.   Thereafter Phil Ambler will be hosting the show and the saga will, hopefully, continue.   (It almost ended here but I could not bear to have it finished yet ...)

Tuesday, 1 May 2012

Still hiccups, but I've changed my mind ... again


A relatively short amount of time hunting for possible images and I came up with this - an amalgamation of two long-ago photos, both taken in Orkney, which is relevant.

More black surrounds and enhances it ... but the price is still being mis-quoted ... grrr!!

Best laid plans ...


I have today successfully uploaded my NaNoWriMo2011 novel, after help from Blurb to overcome a hiccup and then solving further problems because I don't know how to create transparent jpgs so at the last minute changed to what had been plan A for the cover.

BUT on hitting 'order now' I found the price of the book was being stated at £32.95 and not the £9.95 quoted on the beginning page.   Another hiccup no doubt but minorly frustrating - vanity certainly doesn't stretch THAT far!

Friday, 27 April 2012

Big grin

I'm both delighted and relieved by today's news from Lily Childs' Feardom  - delighted to have been awarded winner for last week's Prediction Challenge and relieved that, following Lily's decision to spend more time taking up the challenge of her own writing, Phil Ambler will be continuing what she had built - I trust it will continue to be as absorbing, entetaining and supportive a community in his world.

Continuing episodes of The blacksmith's wife can be read on the Friday Predictions page at the top of this blog.

Wednesday, 25 April 2012

The blacksmith’s wife [part 6]

‘Jenever,’ he said, ‘from sloes, not Amsterdam.   You’re not enough a mother to be ruined.’
He tipped the glass, watched me drink, sloe-eyed himself, inscrutable, all personal emotion hidden, yet knowledge of the hurt I’d dealt caused blood to hammer in my head, tears to flow for what I’d lost.

Not the child, that never had existed, but his belief in me.

Another touch upon my back, forewarning.  ‘Charcoal, to mark the placing of the letters.’  
But gin-loosed tongue took me past sanity;  contemptuously ‘Can you spell?’  
His face hardened.  ‘Trollop, wanton, Jezebel, jade – there’s space to write them all.’

Parts 8 and 9  on this weeks Friday Predictions

Friday, 20 April 2012

Some nine moons wasted [Book Blurb Friday #60]

Married too young, to a man too importunate, Eliza McCleary was certain she’d made a mistake.
Four months into the marriage she ran away, leaving no note, partly to ensure she was not followed, partly to allow him to change his mind.
But freedom was not all it was cracked up to be – freedom from routine meant directionless, freedom from sharing meant she owned nothing worth having and freedom from his caring and  unquestioning love meant … a sort of living hell.   And eventually she realised that more than missing the material comforts he’d provided she loved him too.
But the journey back was a bitter one – she had her pride to overcome, her fear of his rejection, and would have to tell him of all the other mistakes she’d made along the way.   Would he still want her now, when he knew, when he saw the baggage she’d acquired?

Week #60’s response to Lisa Ricard Claro’s Book Blurb Friday challenge and a beautiful photograph provided by Christina Claro
Each week Lisa posts a photograph which represents a book cover.   Participants are challenged to “Write a book jacket blurb (150 words or less) so enticing that potential readers would feel compelled to buy the book”


N.B. - 'some nine moons wasted' is from Shakespeare's 'Othello' - when faced with  a blank photo and mind I refer to my Dictionary of Quotations for inspiration.

Sunday, 15 April 2012

Playing with covers again


Having almost completed the first draft of last November's NaNoWriMo novel, and had extremely useful advice from the Blurb Help Team, I'm shortly going to upload this as a proof copy.   It'll be a 6" x 9" Trade book, running to some 360 pages, and at £11+P&P (~£7) it's not a cheap way of producing books but such is vanity.
The final background colour of the cover might change - this worked as a mock up and I quite like it but other colours might, with experiment, look better (and the ships will be the same size ...)

Friday, 13 April 2012

Friday the thirteenth [Book blurb Friday #59]

Originally commissioned by Melanie Middleton, enterprising manageress of Blackwood Orphanage, as a fund-raising venture, these tales were written and illustrated by the children who live there, for the entertainment of their peers.
A strong believer in allowing children editorial freedom, Melanie Middleton insisted that the only adult input be to ensure that the sense of each story was clear; spelling and grammar has been retained as the original, and in some cases the stories have been printed using the original handwriting.
As a social record of the lives of children deprived of their natural parents it cannot be bettered, but it is as a record of what children really think it gives an honest – and truly terrifying – glimpse into the future – no-one who anticipates staying alive for the next twenty years should fail to read it.

Week #59’s response to Lisa Ricard Claro’s Book Blurb Friday challenge and an intriguing  photograph provided by Sioux Roslawski.
Each week Lisa posts a photograph which represents a book cover.   Participants are challenged to “Write a book jacket blurb (150 words or less) so enticing that potential readers would feel compelled to buy the book”  http://www.writinginthebuff.net/p/book-blurb-friday.html

Thursday, 12 April 2012

Images for Blacksmith's wife


Having a yen to perhaps produce an illlustrated version of my Blacksmith's wife serial - currently to be found on the Friday Predictions page and running to six parts - I have been playing with imagery.

This idea is a mixture of original collagraph and carborundum prints, digitally combined with drawing.
I had originally visualised something strongly black and white but it would be a pity to lose the idea of the flames of the forge.

Friday, 6 April 2012

The eleven labours of Clancy Thorpe [Book Blurb Friday #58]

Clancy Thorpe should have been born a boy.
But her mother died in childbirth and her father could find no-one to match the one love of his life so failed to produce a son and heir.
On the eve of Clancy’s fifteenth birthday her father persuaded the Regional Vampire Council to accept primogeniture, which they did reluctantly, but on condition that she fulfil eleven tasks during the next twelve months to establish her Vampire credentials.

Within ten days a rival appeared – likely spurious but possessing all the necessary qualities of leadership, except that he is five days younger.   With the backing of the majority of the council he sets out to sabotage Clancy’s succession.
Clancy has support  – and weapons of her own  – but will they be good enough to vanquish Vlad Stoker?

Week #58’s response to Lisa Ricard Claro’s Book Blurb Friday challenge and a photograph provided by Kathy Mattews (with apologies for snipping off the end of her name – more haste less speed!) 
Each week Lisa posts a photograph which represents a book cover.   Participants are challenged to “Write a book jacket blurb (150 words or less) so enticing that potential readers would feel compelled to buy the book”  http://www.writinginthebuff.net/p/book-blurb-friday.html

Wednesday, 4 April 2012

Live traffic feeds

Are totally unreliable - I have been cited as 'a reader from', Newcastle, Glasgow and Monmouth, all on same site - where do they get their data from?

Tuesday, 3 April 2012

Twitching towards the studio?


When I was last seriously printmaking I didn't have a blog, but now occasionally visit those of other printmakers.   Possibly the desire to begin again is stirring because on seeing the barbed wire on my way down to the river yesterday, I immediately thought of drypoint and the burrs that are scratched up and possess that beguiling ragged edge when inked and printed.   The randomness of line also appeals.

Sunday, 1 April 2012

Unshed shed memories

A comment in answer to mine, on The domesticated bohemian’s site http://domesticatedbohemian.blogspot.co.uk/2012/02/train-journeys.html regarding something along the lines of “Shed that I have known” resulted in this melange of memories.

My grandfather’s at the far end of the garden, black painted, backing onto the lane, and tall from a four-year-old perspective.  Remembering, I hear an echo of fond and undiluted Yorkshire, see dusty string-tied wooden-handled tools as he extricates bleached-canvas, finger-trapping, wooden framed and notched deckchairs.

Later, at eight or thereabouts, my father using one of a nail-hung bunting line of saws, to create piles of warmly golden sawdust which I yearned to somehow find a way to keep forever, to bottle or preserve the friendly smell, perhaps in one of the several ‘Four Square’ tobacco tins piled on the scarred ad paint-stained bench.

A boyfriend’s, built of railway sleepers, which contained a family heirloom glass-domed clock and where I heard tales of a pig escaping and rampaging from the field behind.   Boyfriend became husband, and for a while our first house-shed housed his pride and joy:  a brand new, bright blue, Royal Star motorbike.   Then children, and for a while boring domestic, garden tools and lawnmowers, plastic chairs and children’s bikes.

‘Til they left home and he retired, since when bikes have multiplied from nought to ten and sheds increased in size and number to accommodate the more-than-overflow from the garage.   No more sawdust and all the tools leave grease-stains on one’s fingers, hence the over-flowing bag of ex-T shirts, now rags.

Saturday, 31 March 2012

Past possible tense [Three word week #38]

Luke knew she dreamt prophetically – witness the dream she told him of all those years ago, when they were both thirteen.   Admittedly she only told him after the event but she had her reasons and by then, even if she had told him (and he would have believed her) there would have been no getting out of going on that trip.
  
And that it turned out so horrifically was nothing to do with psychic over-ride as such.   Yes, it had involved psychological manipulation, the ‘divide and rule’ thing, and he, that man whose name he no longer cared to mention (not because he had not got over the experience – and he thought to a small degree he never would because it was part of him) was fully grown and had well-honed his methods.
  
All they, at thirteen, had had was the sort of knowledge of each other that came with growing up together, but even so there had only been the two of them who had had the guts, the self-belief, the understanding of the need for urgency to even try to combat it.   All those hours of whispered urging the others to believe, to understand what the man had been aiming at, in that room filled with what Dee kept calling ‘janky’ furniture, the stained mattress and folding metal chairs, white enamel paint mostly peeled off, but rusty-edged where it hadn’t.    Every time Dee said the word Luke thought of ‘jankers’ and remembered his uncle who had told him jankers was an army prison, which could equally apply to this.

Much of it had been physical control, which was why every time the four of them had had to lay and listen to the fifth one who was in with him, to hear the whimpered anticipation and the aftermath sharp yip of pain, it undid all the talk of ‘together we can beat him.’
  
In the end it had just taken two, but because there was only two, and because the rest weren’t with them – hadn’t been able to be brought to see sense or the need for action – those two had had to carry out a far larger task, and keep it secret from not only him but the others too.   So big and with such consequences that they had had to claim it an accident, to keep their part in it a secret, to lie about what happened, both to the others and subsequently to everyone who ever asked.   You’d’ve thought that would mean their loyalty to each other would be forever steadfast.

You’d be wrong.

But, back to her.   Back to today and how he’d got here.   Was it due to her hyperinduction?   Her entering his mind, his dream and causing him to make a plan to come back here?   Truly not knowing until she reappeared that that was what had happened?

He could no longer say that was impossible.



This week’s entry for Steve Isaak’s Three Word Week http://www.readingbypublight.blogspot.co.uk/2012/03/3-word-week-38.html

A selection which for once I’ve been able to incorporate into an on-going piece of work, whose provenance owes much to Lisa Ricard Claro’s Book Blurb Friday http://www.writinginthebuff.net/p/book-blurb-friday.html and continued development to the daily prompts on Thinking Ten http://www.thinkingten.com and may well become the follow-up to my NaNoWriMo 2011 novel ‘Not wanted on voyage’, for which I’ve just about finished the first draft. 

I.) hyperinduction - v. When someone psychically overrides - controls - the will and actions of another person. (Source: Alphas, Season 1, episode #1: "Pilot"; original air date: 7/11/11)
II.) janky - adj. - Inferior quality; held in low social regard; old and delapidated; refers almost exclusively to inanimate material objects, not to people.
III.) yip - adj. - n.A sharp, high-pitched bark; a yelp.; intr.v. To emit a yip; yelp.

Friday, 30 March 2012

Prunella Clough by Frances Spalding


Oh joy! and a lovely surprise to read today of a new book - the first proper biography - of my all-time favourite artist.   Needless to say I ordered it within minutes ...

Stranger danger [Book blurb #57]

All the lonely people … you had feel sorry for them … or exploit them.
Jed was an exploiter par excellence.   He needed to be.   To start he’d told himself it was for the money, but once he had enough of that he found he still needed the power.   To use it, to feel it … and to challenge himself to go just that little bit further each time.
Had it not been such a quiet night he’d have ignored the outwardly demure and vulnerable Vivienne – no sweat, no pleasure.
Had it not been such a quiet night he might not have found that there were limits to his power, to his ability to withstand pain.   That sweat did not always equate with pleasure.   And that there were no limits to which she would not go.
Not a nice story – how could it be?  But one which cannot be ignored.

Week #57’s response to Lisa Ricard Claro’s Book Blurb Friday challenge and a photograph of a collagraph print which I based on a sketch done while sitting in Perth’s CBD district at a place called ‘Durty Nellies’ where I’m happy to say the food, drink and ambience were all excellent .
Each week Lisa posts a photograph which represents a book cover.   Participants are challenged to “Write a book jacket blurb (150 words or less) so enticing that potential readers would feel compelled to buy the book”  http://www.writinginthebuff.net/p/book-blurb-friday.html

Wednesday, 28 March 2012

April intention

This house, the house I decided in an instant was the one for us, standing with my back to it and looking at the view, trying to ignore the silly saleswoman who did not deserve her salary, having already kept me sitting there, on guard to prevent anyone else from taking it, for half a day while she hunted for the keys (and the day incidentally my daughter’s third birthday, but she  two hundred and fifty miles south), we have lived in for the past thirty-seven years.
That day I could see the openness, the green of fields and blue of distant hills, and the conical absurdity they told me was called Roseberry Topping, and the wide expanse of sky.
Since then Roseberry’s top has been blown off lest it become too dangerous, much green has turned to red filled with what was said to be the largest housing estate in Europe, the straggled hawthorn hedge across the road has grown to hide the hills, but we still have the wide expanse of sky, and can track the annual progress of the sunrise from beyond far left in summer round to the Cleveland Hills on the shortest day.
And there, also but low (so no fear of flooding) and out of sight, is the river, the river Tees, then tidal, flowing out from right to left and leaving twice daily expanses of wet mud so that there was always a question when walking down to it as to what one might see.   Until they built the barrage and removed variety, leaving just the growth of the giant hogweed and the comings and goings of the fishermen to make the changes, so that, lacking dogs and children, I ceased walking down between the golf course and the field and cannot now remember when I did it last.
But from the first of April I have vowed that I will do it daily partly for the exercise and fresh air (I spend too long sat at my computer) but also so that I can return home with a line or two, some words of poetry or prose to add to my stones of communication blog.