Tuesday, 23 August 2016

Found poetry - river 15


Inspired by Adam Byatt's 'blackout poetry' (and also Tom Phillips 'Humument' my daughter and I set up a challenge using identical books. This - page 15 - is my first attempt.


For clarity, text reads:

Night heat delivery
sipped cream harmony.

dressed, their eyes question night devices,
advances
evaluating source and making human new.

I suspect I need to incorporate existing punctuation, and certainly need to make sure not to obliterate words I intended to use.

And my far better-practised daughter's version is here

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