Monday, 10 August 2015

Striations, suffocation and dried flowers

Suffocation the cause of death. The official cause. Ask me, there’d been damage done before that. Subtle, like. Little at a time. Sly, like she ever was.
Not that I’m saying she deserved it. There’s a difference between administering physical  pain to someone too feeble to resist and the sort of mental torture she used to dish out on a regular basis ...
Well, perhaps the difference isn’t that great. Not when you don’t have the ... I was going to say wits, but it was experience he lacked. Experience and a sense of self-preservation. Though you had to say he preserved himself well enough in the end. After all, she housed and fed him, however unwillingly, and he – coming up to thirty-nine now – never had to worry whether there’d be food enough on the table. Never had to strive to better himself beyond the meniality of a mechanic.
But, from the striations on her back, the mottled blackberry-stain bruises on her legs (they fade so slowly in old age) and the marks across her chest, resembling, at a glance, a scattering  of sun-faded, long-dried flowers (I couldn’t allow my mind to think about what had been used to make them) I’d say he used his work experience – and the tools of his job – to extract his revenge.
And got away with it.


[written in response to House of Writers word prompt 104]

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