Why her?
Why now?
She’d been due to return tomorrow, to the farm she’d vividly described, red earth, big skies and far distant horizons.
But someone had prevented that; at least, not permitted her to return alive.
He’d understood she knew nobody here.
And only mentioned one man there: Jake.
Who, she’d said, in the lucid moments between waking, guilt-entwined in the furrow-sheeted dawn and her engulfing him again, would never forgive what she had done.
‘Need he know?’ he’d asked, matching rhythm.
‘He always knows,’ she’d told him, distant-eyed.
Took some time but this is a response (one of three - the others are already posted) to Phil Ambler's Prediction prompts: farm, tumour and lucid]
A powerful first line.
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