Herewith my alternative:
Hypochondria
‘Vaccine? Don’t be ridiculous!’
Contempt in every angle of her sprawled limbs, the flare of her nostrils and her lightly-raised eyebrows, the depth of her slutty depravity further exaggerated by the slatted shadows which striped both her and the screwed-up sheets. Another half-hour and there’d be sufficient light to turn this chiaroscuro soft-ground etching to something more common-place. For the moment he was both mesmerised and horrified as was apparent from the higher-than-usual pitch of his voice, addressing her from where he stood naked by the sink.
‘I’ve run cold water on it’ he said plaintively, ‘and it still stings.’
It's a strange and poetic piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Derek - I find the 100 word format quite addictive, and although the nod towards noir is slightly out of my comfort zone it is fun to try.
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