Friday, 6 May 2011


One prize – the exquisite Framleigh Hall

Two major drawbacks - the boorish, brainless and repulsive son and heir along
with his merry widow of a mother who will move only as far as the Lodge upon his marriage

Three would-be-wives - two plain, one beautiful;  two with brains and one with native cunning;
one sweet, one sour and one whose past is cloaked in shadows

Four red herrings - a profligate, promiscuous younger son;  the merry widow’s aristocratic and intelligent lawyer lover;  a premature birth and a blackmailing bigamist of a butler

Five hundred pages  - the drama begins at the last of the Season’s summer balls
and ends fifteen years later with the only possible, legitimate winner finally
in triumphant possession

You cannot afford to skip a single page of this engrossing, enthralling tale

[130 words]

Week #10’s response to Lisa Ricard Claro’s Book Blurb Friday challenge and Becky Povich’s photo.   Each week Lisa posts a photograph which represents a book cover.   Participants are challenged to “Write a book jacket blurb (150 words or less) so enticing that potential readers would feel compelled to buy the book”   The number of ought-to-be but not-yet-written books, sadly, increases weekly.

14 comments:

  1. I love this, and I love the way you've written it. I like the 1-5, and it has all the elements needed for a juicy read. I'd certainly read this book.

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  2. I can't wait to start reading this! I love your intrigue and layout - wonderful blurb!

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  3. Have you ever read any Jonathan Coe? I think you should. This definitely sounds like something he wrote.

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  4. Good Lord, Sandra, you are such a natural! I love it all, and you made such a beautiful book cover too. Of course, I am most interested in the bad boy of a younger brother. He is sure to mess things up. I can't wait to read this one.

    Have a wonderful weekend,

    Kathy M.

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  5. Now this sounds like a book I could really lose myself in and a story to keep the reader guessing.

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  6. oh I love how you've structured the blurb, Sandra, so very clever!! And you managed to pack so many characters in there, amazing!!

    Sorry about the commenting glitch, you can actually still comment on my posts! I've added your comments to the post comments and removed the comment box in the sidebar, it seems to be a distraction. heheh.

    Have a cool weekend!
    grace

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  7. Sandra,
    I want to read more about the would-be-wives they could really spice up a 500 page book! So many intriguing characters, too!


    ~Jean

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  8. Oh, I must have all 500 pages of this book! It's like Jane Austen on soap opera steroids...and with a blackmailing bigamist of a butler as well!!! I chuckled through the characters, but it truly would be a fantastic summer read!

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  9. You managed to start character development in only 130 words!

    Well done!

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  10. This is one of those books I will be sorry to put down when the last page is turned. It has so much to offer already! I'm reminded of The Forsyte Saga by John Galsworthy, all twists and turns and love and betrayal and, most of all, memorable characters that I love, or love to hate. Wonderful!

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  11. I love how you designed the cover. Very creative. And I loved all the red herrings spelled out! My only criticism? As a word person, there was too many numbers! HAHA!

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  12. This was great. I love the different types of stories that come from the same picture.

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  13. Many thanks to you all for your comments - it IS fascinating to see how differently each interprets thee photographs.
    MorningAJ - my daughter has a couple of Jonathan Coe & will lend me some time, thank you
    Kathy - yes - we all get hooked by badly behaved brothers don't we?
    Grace - I'm having computer problems myself which probably contributed to the cock-up with comments
    Tammy and Lisa - thanks for the Jane Austen comparison, and the John Forsyte - I was also thinking of Elizabeth Jane Howard ...
    Jenners - have nor fear - I don't do numbers either so five is my limit.

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  14. The cast of characters sound just like my in-laws.

    Well done, Sandra. The characters are so colorful, this is guaranteed to be a great read.

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