Friday, 15 April 2011

Calling on the seven gods of luck

 A motor-caravan had been fun for a honeymoon but to celebrate the seventh anniversary of a marriage which felt as arid as the river they were camped beside, it was fast becoming a recipe for disaster.

Disaster, however, came from a different direction, providing far bigger challenges than believing that Dan had selected his pretty fitness coach purely for her professional skills, that Leonora really did have to go on all those business trips, and that her suspected pregnancy might make, not break, their marriage.  

Already alarmed by a lone woman fellow-camper claiming to know something from Dan’s past and  concerned about Leonora’s stomach cramps - indigestion or something worse? - the realisation that the overnight storm has created a flash flood which will engulf them unless they learn to trust and co-operate ratchets tensions to a level where failure to adapt will reduce their chances of survival.


This is week #7’s response to Lisa Ricard Claro’s Book Blurb Friday challenge and Lyn Obermoeller’s photpgraph.   Each week Lisa posts a photograph which represents a book cover.   Participants are challenged to “Write a book jacket blurb (150 words or less) so enticing that potential readers would feel compelled to buy the book”   
http://www.writinginthebuff.net/p/book-blurb-friday.html

14 comments:

  1. I love the phrase "rachets tension." You have all the necessary ingredients to whip up an exciting story.

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  2. It's that magical seven thing. There's always potential for things to go either way when seven's involved.

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  3. I love it. I want to read more and find out what happened. It's so fun hearing what others wrote about your photograph. Nice job.

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  4. Replacing mistrust with trust is difficult. This will really be a taut novel - a real page-turner.

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  5. Wow! Great job, Sandra. I was worried about a flash flood too. Hey, I went ahead and added my first version of my blurb, if you have time to check it out again. Maybe I should have stuck with it.

    Kathy M.

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  6. This has a Deliverance feel to it...lots of tension!

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  7. Thank you all - I have to say this felt a lot more of a struggle to me up with something I actually wanted to read myself - there are so many other good ideas being posted this week.

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  8. I'm wanting to read it to see if they brought the fitness coach with them or just the baggage she represents!

    I was able to cut down my wordy blurb to just over 150 words. Found an online word counter and went from there.

    You can find me at:
    The Frustrated Foodie

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  9. This book has more twists and turns than that river. What an exciting story! Love the title, too.

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  10. I agree you have come up with a great title - it invites the reader to investigate further. Great blurb and loved the idea of a flash flood, I hadn't even thought of that. Maybe it's because I live in flat NJ? LOL!

    ~Jean

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  11. Love it ... especially the "Paige-Turner" award!!

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  12. You have all kinds of plots and sub-plots. This sounds like one that will keep me up at night turning the pages to see what happens next. Terrific!

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  13. A Paige Turner it is for sure. I love the complexities and the characters you've mangaged to develope in so few words. Nice!
    Grace

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  14. Thank you all - this will join my 'pot of possibility' file as a 'maybe write some time' Certainly Jabblog's comment is a helpful one ...

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