Read through printed version last night and this morning.
Hmm ... Deborah Ross's review of the latest Harry Potter film comments on the relentless pace of it all, and I think there is an element of this in the early part - my reluctance to bore as I go over the back story, but it IS a problem I think and I need to find a way to slow it down, but maintain interest.
Also there are several repetitions of facts, as if I don't trust the reader to get it the first time round.
Also there are thirteen corrections to be made, most minor but in one case a chunk of text has gone AWOL.
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