Five star review for latest of David Mark's Aector MacAvoy series, bought at a Book Flood event held at Moorforge Viking Settlement in Cumbria, appropriately enough against a background of wind and rain and thunder. 'Thunder", as following multiple flashes of lightning is how this book reads. I'd binge-read the entire series in anticipation of this, teased by the many hints of shady back story about the circumstances of McAvoy and Roisin's coming together. The gradual reveals - and there were several of them - piled tension high enough to turn knuckles white, thanks to the stuttering uncertainties as to whether - <i>this</i> time ... it might come good. As ever, the prose was similarly breath-taking.
Mostly words, a few prints, a few drawings ... and several unfinished stories
Friday, 28 October 2022
Tuesday, 25 October 2022
Goodreads recommendations going barmy!!
Because you are currently reading The Crime Writer's Guide to Police Practice and Procedure:
Monday, 30 May 2022
Blurb says "No more ebook"
Starting mid-July 2022, Blurb will no longer support the creation and publishing of ebooks. Much as I personally dislike the format, and prefer print, it is hard to justify their purchase when a P&P of £6,99 is added to the £9.99 cost of a paperback. A sensibly-priced alternative is to order a £4.99 PDF version.
Monday, 8 November 2021
Jane Jesmond - On the Edge
As it says on the cover, Jen Shaw loves danger. Even so, hanging off a lighthouse, held only by a fraying rope does sound less than delightful, but to say that she survived beyond chapter two doesn't count as a spoiler because there's plenty more dodgy situations to overcome, not least her embroilment in her eccentric family's problems and the man who rescues her from the rain. But there's another plus, because while racing through to find out whether, and how, she'll escape, I was also aware of how much I savoured the skill of the writing. Enough for me to know I'll be re-reading this again shortly, and more slowly, to properly appreciate.
I promised myself a re-read, and spent all day yesterday doing just that; unable (thanks to my inability to remember how it ended) to put it down, and held by the many tensions on the way to the finale). Now left satisfied, but craving more.
Sunday, 19 September 2021
Progress no longer said to be snappy
'Snap', initially a reference to a schoolgirl's opportune photo of an about-to-marry couple, became more relevant as 'Snap is not a children's game' developed. As usual, this fifth book in the 'Love triangles with murder' series was kick-started, in December 2019, with a conversation. As also usual, as the novel progressed the conversation moved from opening chapter to page 130.
I felt ashamed at having asked her to spend time on such a sub-standard piece of … writing.
Since then I have been removing superfluous words, characters
and plot-strands; strengthening those new to the story and (I hope) enabling the
plot to stand n its own merit.
Friday, 26 March 2021
My first ever independent blog review and interview
Drink with a dead man reviewed on Carol McKay's Lockdown book blog https://carolmckay.blogspot.
Friday, 26 February 2021
'Drink with a dead man' - now available
Similarly unexpectedly Edinburgh crime reporter Baz Rose hears of a
proposed, and potentially problematic, reunion for four ex-uni friends who fled
apart on graduation.
DI Luke Darbyshere receives a tip-off more interesting for its provenance
than its content. In pursuing that he finds himself in professional conflict
with the woman who, having given him six months to convince her they should
marry, is struggling to solve a murder.
And Drew Bishop is determined on revenge.
Friday, 15 January 2021
Mercy for a Friday child
Among the conversations which I've known Luke and Baz and Fran must have, as a result of what happened in 'Snap', a new murder story is beginning to emerge, and make connections to what has gone on in the past.
Very early days yet, but finding the perfect title - which then gave impetus and focus to a rag-bag of semi thought-out scenes - and designing the cover has further helped it find a shape.
Sunday, 27 December 2020
Top Ten books read for the first time in 2020
Tuesday, 15 December 2020
And having come
I counted the words as I dealt with each section, totted them up, and then the time it has taken to get from setting down its intended beginning to yesterday's final 'Save' - a mere thirteen months. Not that it felt that quick, the months and months I laboured over Theo's story, but it's a huge improvement on the four years of 'Drink with a dead man', and even more so on the eight years of 'Step so grave'
Thursday, 19 November 2020
'Snap is not a children's game' - cards dealt, now resting
First draft of 'Snap is not a children's game' - book 5 in the 'Love triangles with murder' series featuring DI Luke Darbyshere - today completed at ~96000 words.
Now to let it rest for a bit, so I can come to it fresh and see where all the plotholes are.
Monday, 27 April 2020
Love triangles with murder - now available as ebooks
I've FINALLY got my act together and made available as ebooks my Love triangles with murder series:
At £3.99 each, that works out at a penny per page.
Tuesday, 3 December 2019
Brilliant Blurb!
Tuesday, 17 September 2019
Commission & omission
Second is publicity-shy artist Ivo Kinnersley whose exhibition it is.
Despite a multitude of motives, and many witnesses, evidence to convict either proves elusive. The discovery of a new lead coincides with Ed’s fortieth birthday, interrupting a weekend of celebrations during which DI Luke Darbyshere learns that Ivo Kinnersley has not only already escaped one murder charge, but also shares a past and a secret with the woman with whom he wants to spend the rest of his life.
(Prediction Fiction participants might be pleased to know Pettinger plays a part in this.)
Friday, 13 September 2019
Longest shadows reach
‘Step so grave’ indicated a wealth of history between Luke Darbyshere and Baz Rose. They’d been
born within a week of each other; lived half mile apart, in a Hertfordshire
village small enough to allow no escape.
Each came successfully through adolescence courtesy of Susannah Elphinstone (Baz two years before Luke).Tuesday, 27 August 2019
Inspiratiion and coincidence - 'Longest shadows reach'
Friday, 19 July 2019
'Step so grave' - at last!
Nearly eight years later, the final, final version of ‘Step so Grave’ is available to order.
Sunday, 26 May 2019
Words paint pictures
I was immediately struck with the comparative stark sketchiness of my version of a police briefing. Perhaps because the book just finished* dealt with painting, I realised that my paintings and prints similarly outline; drawn with the minimum of detail for the viewer to get the gist.
In part, with writing, my knowledge of police briefings is scant enough to provide a reason for lack of detail, yet I am reluctant to go seek it, believing readers deserve to exercise their imagination.
The degree to which they wish to has, of course, an impact on how much they are likely to enjoy my books. When I finally get them published (and this one I'm only 80% through writing.)
*Jackie Baldwin's 'Perfect Dead', set in Dumfries & Galloway, much of the action in 'art town' Kirkcudbright.
Saturday, 18 May 2019
Just signed up for this

http://www.crimeandpublishment.co.uk
- I so missed it last year. One of the friendliest writing groups you could wish to meet.
Friday, 1 March 2019
Temptation

Similarly post-harvest, the blond stubble of his beard had brought my skin to cherry-ripe.
Monday, 31 December 2018
Stand-out books of 2018

I really
cannot praise London Rules highly enough. Like all of Mick Herron's Slough
House series the protagonists are an endless source of entertainment, the pace
is lunatic and the observations so incredibly sharp they tingle one's brain.Sunday, 30 September 2018
Poems of the decade 1992-2001
I have no recollection of buying or otherwise obtaining this book - it has been on the shelf for a decade or more and, from the pristineness of its pages, never opened. Taking it into the toilet, reading a poem or more on each visit - and several re-read several times - has given me a great deal of pleasure.127 poems, written in the 1990s. Only two did I find unreadable. A dozen I noted as especially impactful, for reasons of thought-provoking, memory-reviving or the simple enjoyment of the choosing and putting together words and how they told the intentions of the poet. One such was Vicki Feaver's 'Judith', on the strength of which I bought two more of her books. And intend to look out for more of other poets.
Those I pink-stickered include Thom Gunn, Stuart Henson, Mimi Khalvati, Roddy Lumsden, Les Murray, Stephanie Norgate, Evangeline Paterson, Robin Robertson, Vernon Scannell and Jean Sprackand.
Wednesday, 4 July 2018
Delivery of a secret fantasy
Thursday, 14 June 2018
Heightened awareness
As with a daylight visit to a nightclub, when the morning-after, melancholic echo of late-night jazz brings only sour emptiness and headache, the reality of spunk-starched sheets and stickiness, stale breath and stubble rash, rarely failed to deduct pleasure from the memory of the night.Not until my eyes alighted on the tawdry apparatus for the drugs we’d taken, until I heard the crackle of the plastic as I turned, saw your tethered wrists, your staring, sightless eyes, did I understand why the ecstasy of last night’s orgasm was so vividly recalled.
Saturday, 24 March 2018
Going out tonight?
Thursday, 15 March 2018
Duplicity
Wednesday, 25 October 2017
Caveat emptor
Monday, 2 October 2017
The necessity of cosmetic
From her bedroom a flare of conversation
through a just-opened door; cut-off laughter. Her reflection grimaced back at
her, picturing guilt; laughter was for post-burial, after whisky had begun to
flow. 
























